2007年4月24日
Learning Journal(4/17~4/23)
After I make the second edition of the assignment. I think making three paragraph will be easier then just one paragraph. I might be the main reason that I am used to writing three paragraph since I was a senior high school student. In these paragraph, I can write the motive in first, the reasons in second and the conclusion in final. Besides, I think it will be read easier.
Learning Journal(4/10~4/16)
After classmates read my assignment and gave me some comments, I think I still have lots of problem.There are some appearance of my mistakes:
1. Beside of the computer, I wanted to say that I want to major in network, so I also let it be one of my reason. However, the reader felt that it had no connection with the main sentence. After reading again, I think it is true. I have to let "computer science" be the center and make reason from it, not change to another center "network". It might cause confusion in this article.
2. The main sentence is not clear. In the first sentence, maybe I can not write one of reasons quickly. I have to analysis all the reasons and make a main reason. After the main reason, It will understand other reasons easily.
1. Beside of the computer, I wanted to say that I want to major in network, so I also let it be one of my reason. However, the reader felt that it had no connection with the main sentence. After reading again, I think it is true. I have to let "computer science" be the center and make reason from it, not change to another center "network". It might cause confusion in this article.
2. The main sentence is not clear. In the first sentence, maybe I can not write one of reasons quickly. I have to analysis all the reasons and make a main reason. After the main reason, It will understand other reasons easily.
2007年4月8日
Learning Journal (4/3~4/9)
In 4/3 class, we learn what we should write article to let others people to read clearly.
Review the article I have written, I always wanted to write lots of sentence. Therefore, the article is confusing because I wrote something that is not have application with the theme. That's what I feel confused when I review my articles.
Review the article I have written, I always wanted to write lots of sentence. Therefore, the article is confusing because I wrote something that is not have application with the theme. That's what I feel confused when I review my articles.
2007年4月3日
Learning Journal (3/19~3/25)
Because I had to spend most of time joining the Campus Creativity Dressing Competition,
I just made the grammer test in CILL in this week.
After 30 questions, I got 13 grades.
Most of the mistakes were in the 2nd part of questions.
It was so hard to answer when I didn't have the selections for the answers.
I just made the grammer test in CILL in this week.
After 30 questions, I got 13 grades.
Most of the mistakes were in the 2nd part of questions.
It was so hard to answer when I didn't have the selections for the answers.
Learning Journal (3/12~3/18)
In the weekend, I tried to studied the first 60 AWL words.
I didn't have much trouble because I already learned most of the words.
However, I still forgot some of words.
It's terrible...........
I didn't have much trouble because I already learned most of the words.
However, I still forgot some of words.
It's terrible...........
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