Although I have to improve the organization of assignment 2,
it is hard to let the article clearly.
At last, I guess the main reason of this big problem is: I use the brainstorming to make my article.
I think it is a good way to practice my writing and imagination in a short time.
However, I can't organize a good article to be read easily.
Therefore, in assignment 3, I will make a list to decide what I want to write.
Because the invention I decide is mobile phone, it is easier to make pros and cons to introduce the advantages of mobile phone.
I hope that after changing the writing style, I can improve my article.
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